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    Illustration EssayGiving examples to make your essay

    lively

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    Todays agenda

    Getting back quizzes (Still working on Week 7)

    Learning to describe characters, objects, ideas, etc.

    Understanding what makes good examples

    Using sentence patterns to make examples

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    Illustrate (v.)Illustration (n.)To show something clearly

    and accurately with

    examples;

    To draw pictures.

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    Illustration/Example

    EssayUse vivid, bright and

    specific examples

    Show, explain or prove

    a point

    Expressive withsupport using

    examples

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    3-part structure of an

    illustration essayIntroduction:

    What do you want to prove? (TS)

    Body paragraphs x 3:ts: points from TS

    examples: to support ts

    ConclusionTell people what you want to prove again;

    Draw conclusion from BPs

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    Character

    SketchDescribing a character to

    let readers understand

    him/her more

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    What you want to tell

    readers...

    How a character speaks and talks to people

    Their ways of doing things

    How they value things

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    You can do the

    following:BRIEFLY describe the place you meet the

    character

    What the person wears

    What happens when youre together

    How he uses gestures and facial expressions to

    express himself

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    A good example is...

    Accur te: o do t

    gi e false impressio s

    le r: rief a d easil

    derstood

    I tere ti : dra i g

    readers atte tio

    Relev t: elated to

    topi

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    Use of connectives

    Basic: for instance, for

    example

    Advanced: in other

    words, consider

    Pro: an illustration ofthis, specifically

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    The Story TreeSara crewe in hogson burnetts sara crewe

    SaraSara

    poor, determinedpoor, determined

    Miss Minchins SchoolMiss Minchins School

    live a decent lifelive a decent life

    Minchin is cold and meanMinchin is cold and meannot defeated but determined to winnot defeated but determined to win

    Sara found a solid and reliable familySara found a solid and reliable family

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    Prove a Point - GroupWork

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    Justification(n.)

    Justify (v.)to show, or prove something

    is right by giving reasons

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    To prove the

    truthfulness of the TS:

    Auth ntic (real)

    examples

    Succ ssful sport stars

    They really work hardto achi succ ss

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    How he illustrates his

    points:

    Shows sportsmen try

    hard even after

    achievement

    Shows sportsmens

    endurance and braveryto face adversity

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    Job as a nurse...

    Physically demanding

    Lifting patients

    Changing patients sleeping

    positions

    Moving patients around

    Helping them stand up

    Helping them bathe and get

    dressed

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    How aboutfunny

    lawmakers?List the examples as

    instructed

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    Easy task: transition

    expression + support with

    example

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    Final task: write anillustration paragraph

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    By next week, you

    must:Come up with an essay topic + title

    Come up with a 3-point TS

    Come up with nice ts + idea OUTLINE

    Develop ONE point at least

    Review how you do peer editing

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    Task grading

    Essay outline + ideas (10%)

    Peer review (5%)

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    Good luck!